Open Question: what do you think about this prologue?

Feb 04, 2012 @ 05:32 pm by

She dead gone
NO! She not gone Ian said running up to the body that laid on the cold ground. Salty tears ran down their faces looking down at the girl; the blood oozed through the young girl chest, what they didn’t know wouldn’t hurt Colette thought to herself. Liam reached for the dragger that was plunge in her forehead. “What are you doing”? Colette asked pulling him away. Don’t worry about it he told her; maybe she should call the police Ebony sniffed the words out trying not to look at the body.

NO! Xavier yelled we have no evidence no proof nothing how are we going to explain this! Ebony sobbed some more between the blurriness of her hazel eyes LIAM! WE AVE TO DO SOMETHING THIS IS YOUR FAULT. Liam interrupted before she could finish the sentence “YOU KNOW NOTHING! YOU HEAR ME NOTHING YOU DIDN’T SEE OR HEAR ANYTHING IS THAT CLEAR. Everyone exchange looks, and then back at Liam who was almost as red as the blood that poured from the girl head.

Before I get any further let me start by introducing myself: My name is Scarlet Maria-Ann King I’m a student at Aquila Academy along with my twin sister: Sonia Elizabeth-King whose a few minutes younger than I am and you have no idea what I been through, the things I seen, and the things I done, but not only me but everyone else as well.

Everything started a few weeks ago before school started Sonia and I was hanging out with our friends at our second favorite hangout: Jade’s the only mall that had everything: food court Liam and Xavier favorite places and seventeen other stores to choose from. It was a late Friday night damp, dark, foggy not to mention twenty-three degrees as always. The light flicker a few times then it was completely dark. We would’ve been fine if we hadn’t stop for the strangers; the tall one was very fit the one in the middle looked muscular than the one on the far right who was very ordinary, who was pretty hard to recognize; he/she was covered in black from head to toe with black leather gloves, he/she casted its shadow to the open dim light that was still flicking on and off, but never less it was hard for us to see its face.

“Um excuse me?” I shouted walking up to her or him without even noticing the blood dripping from the metal that was pull out of its pockets swinging at us like crazy psychopaths. We had no other choice to run as fast as we can into the Cold Creek woods that was believe to be haunted by ghosts, evil spirits, and murder. The large root grab my ankle pulling me down as I watch in horror the someone I cared about someone who was close to me sharing everything telling each other secrets; the metal slice down her back ripping her white ruffle shirt then once again through her heart. The tall one jump her while the other two holding her down she tried to scream muffing through the towel ,but nothing the short beefy one turned to my direction staring into my eyes then looked away wiping the metal clean then disappeared along with the other two. I looked around unsure of what to say or what to do I didn’t see the others I called there names, but no one answered. I manage to get away from the root rushing to find the others standing over her body with tears in their eyes.

“Your dead you hear me when I fine you; you are DEAD! Ian shouted out to the empty woods breathing heavy trying to keep his balance from falling over. They not gone there still here I thought to myself their somewhere behind or in front of us ready to kill us all.

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